You know, I THOUGHT I would be able to reconstruct, redesign and renew the characters myself.
But it's a lot on my plate. There are a few characters who could be scraped off, Leo and Izuho/Izabelle(I don't even know their gender! I'm clueless about them!), if only because they don't really have that much relevance or importance. Leo might be saved with a lot of character tweaking, though.
Creating a character is a lot of work- making about ten or so is TONS.
I know who to ask for help, too.
But I have no idea if she's been online lately. (Hidden user)
I'm not giving up, though. I've put a lot of effort into this.
Lets see- Airigh(The character, not me, stupid, I can develop my personality myself), Levatia, Sievian and Rogis are basically done, along with Quentin(though I don't have to do much), and possibly Albert. I think Izuho may have to get booted out of the story- their placement makes no sense and they're rather unimportant. IF YOU WANT ME TO KEEP HIM, MAKE HIM DO SOMETHING IMPORTANT CHEERIO. I don't think I need to do much/anything to Jessica, Momo and Blake- Blake's already waay out of character. XD

But check out this character backbone I constructed of Izzy.

7---Izuho
%*Matter conversion, a rare power that's quite sought-after
?Is a samurai
?purple eyes
-has not done anything important yet
?purple hair
?pink hair
?blue hair
?Clown hair
-cowlick

Look at all those questionmarks! I know nothing about this guy! And it sounds to me like he's turning into Gakupo. Really, his existence makes no sense at all. (Plus, the way he's introduced is excessively suspicious. If we can change that, we may be safe.)
Oh.
Maybe I could work off that. Maybe he's like completely insane. However, I was kinda saving that as character development for a different character. We'll see.
There's also the fact that I split one character into three, which I don't know was even necessary except that I have a few different personality ideas for them maybe I don't know. Maybe I'll just have like two brothers.

Also the space bar is acting weird, like someone spilled something sticky on it.(wow that could be taken the wrong way)

Now lets get in depth with the other characters.

Starting with this text from the plot overview:
"The teen is actually a local garage band singer singer in disguise/random bum (ask fans and Cheerio) named Leo"
What. Am I just throwing ideas anywhere? And what fans? I don't see any fans. Nope, no air ventilation here.

"-Quentin's adopted father after the terrorist operation to eliminate the parents of childeren; about 60% percent of children lost their parents."
Did the KND do this?

In short, I can't continue the story until I know what the hell these characters are supposed to act like. I know who to go to, who to ask, who to discuss with, who in which the story will njot be ruined should I give away it's dirty little secrets. The thing is if they're around or not.